Rewriting a social media post for a custom made tote bag

On a web post of a custom made tote bag (see attachments), I came up with a hook about what the tote bag would offer the buyers based on their needs (or instantly create one if they don’t have any yet), that I take the sellers’ ideas (YOURS too) and picturize it in a way that touches, engages and moves their audience to take an action. less